Hey Kelsey, I really like all of the different words you have chosen to describe Wilfred Laurier. A lot of them are really accurate and describe him really well. I like the fact that the background is all white and the words are black which makes it easy to read; however some of the words are really small and I can’t make them out very well (It could also just be my computer screen). Another thing is that maybe you should have formatted it differently because I do not see how this is a picture of Wilfred Laurier. I have found some cool facts about him at https://www.scribd.com/doc/36570598/A-Few-Facts-About-Sir-Wilfrid-Laurier if you wanted to check them out; overall…Nice!
Nice picture and good descriptive words Kelsey. I like how you put in words and descriptions from just a lot of the different parts of Wilfred Laurier's life. I like the idea of your format with the difference in word sizes, but some of the words are very small and hard or impossible to read. One of your words is ‘Rapid Growth; rapid growth of what? Was he a part of something that had a lot of success and acknowledgement, or is it a reference to his overeating of McDonalds (not that there was McDonalds back than)? Overall it is pretty good, but maybe consider different formatting next time. The white background makes it hard to tell who the picture is of.
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Hey Kelsey, I really like all of the different words you have chosen to describe Wilfred Laurier. A lot of them are really accurate and describe him really well. I like the fact that the background is all white and the words are black which makes it easy to read; however some of the words are really small and I can’t make them out very well (It could also just be my computer screen). Another thing is that maybe you should have formatted it differently because I do not see how this is a picture of Wilfred Laurier. I have found some cool facts about him at https://www.scribd.com/doc/36570598/A-Few-Facts-About-Sir-Wilfrid-Laurier if you wanted to check them out; overall…Nice!
ReplyDeleteNice picture and good descriptive words Kelsey. I like how you put in words and descriptions from just a lot of the different parts of Wilfred Laurier's life. I like the idea of your format with the difference in word sizes, but some of the words are very small and hard or impossible to read. One of your words is ‘Rapid Growth; rapid growth of what? Was he a part of something that had a lot of success and acknowledgement, or is it a reference to his overeating of McDonalds (not that there was McDonalds back than)? Overall it is pretty good, but maybe consider different formatting next time. The white background makes it hard to tell who the picture is of.
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